It was the voices that were originally tripping me up. TOS Kirk and Spock are ingrained in my bones. I can hear their voices no problem. But I was having trouble figuring out how these guys should sound. Then someone (I think it was ND) made a comment somewhere about Reboot Kirk's frat boy nature, and the first few lines of dialogue popped out of the ether.
I'm very pleased you thought the voices worked. Of course, you now have me thinking about how I'd write this in the TOS universe. (It would be very different, but very interesting.)
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Date: 2011-03-04 11:45 am (UTC)I'm very pleased you thought the voices worked. Of course, you now have me thinking about how I'd write this in the TOS universe. (It would be very different, but very interesting.)