I couldn't see this on my flist last night, but here it is :D
I know you had concerns about getting Guerrero's voice right but you shouldn't have. Given that so much of his "voice" is in fact his actions, this works really well, particularly when he grabs Chance's shirt and forces him down to his own eye level.
I love the touches like "the unspoken bro' code" and Guerrero being able to feel the seams in his shirt tearing.
Yay! *twirls you*
I couldn't see this on my flist last night, but here it is :D
I know you had concerns about getting Guerrero's voice right but you shouldn't have. Given that so much of his "voice" is in fact his actions, this works really well, particularly when he grabs Chance's shirt and forces him down to his own eye level.
I love the touches like "the unspoken bro' code" and Guerrero being able to feel the seams in his shirt tearing.
Thanks, petal. ♥