I really like the way this story reveals itself. Bodie's frustration in the opening scene -- Bloody fucking Raymond Doyle -- followed by his waiting in all evening in case Doyle graces him with a phone call really sets us up for something other than Doyle having been taken, that Doyle has been deliberately callous in some way.
And this is just so the lads: "Because my French is better than yours."
"Your French is atrocious," Bodie said with mock outrage.
"Yours sounds like you learned it in an African mercenary camp."
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Date: 2009-02-12 05:29 am (UTC)I really like the way this story reveals itself. Bodie's frustration in the opening scene -- Bloody fucking Raymond Doyle -- followed by his waiting in all evening in case Doyle graces him with a phone call really sets us up for something other than Doyle having been taken, that Doyle has been deliberately callous in some way.
And this is just so the lads:
"Because my French is better than yours."
"Your French is atrocious," Bodie said with mock outrage.
"Yours sounds like you learned it in an African mercenary camp."
"Bastard."
"I'll tell my mum you called me that, shall I?"
"Don't you dare. She'll have my head off."
Thanks. :D