Mission Accomplished. More or Less

[przed]

I finally have a complete draft of my UNCLE Down the Chimney Affair story. Hooray! And also, whew.

It's off to one beta, but she's swamped with her own last minute Christmas writing. Anyone else care to take a look at 6,000 plus words of UNCLE and point out where it desperately needs improvement?

Comments

[st-crispins.livejournal.com]

I'm game. If I'm not too woozy after the dentist

[and you beat me :) ]

[przed.livejournal.com]

I didn't ask you 'cause I figured you'd be swamped.

It's on its way. (If I can reciprocate, let me know. We'll be here until Thursday morning.)

BTW, I'm sending to both your verizon and att addresses, since I can't remember which one is current.

[msmoat.livejournal.com]

If you should need another, I'd be happy to read. I'm finishing up my one obligation, so I have time. I do read a bit of UNCLE, although not as much as those who are deep into the fandom!

[przed.livejournal.com]

I may take you up on this tomorrow. My first two betas found some major structural things with the ending. I'm tweaking now, and wouldn't mind fresh eyes on the new version.

[periwinkle27.livejournal.com]

if you need to, send it to me

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the offer.

I'm in the midst of an edit, but may just send you the new version tomorrow. Stay tuned...