Mission Accomplished. More or Less

[przed]

I finally have a complete draft of my UNCLE Down the Chimney Affair story. Hooray! And also, whew.

It's off to one beta, but she's swamped with her own last minute Christmas writing. Anyone else care to take a look at 6,000 plus words of UNCLE and point out where it desperately needs improvement?

Comments

[st-crispins.livejournal.com]

I'm game. If I'm not too woozy after the dentist

[and you beat me :) ]

[przed.livejournal.com]

I didn't ask you 'cause I figured you'd be swamped.

It's on its way. (If I can reciprocate, let me know. We'll be here until Thursday morning.)

BTW, I'm sending to both your verizon and att addresses, since I can't remember which one is current.