Mission Accomplished. More or Less

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I finally have a complete draft of my UNCLE Down the Chimney Affair story. Hooray! And also, whew.

It's off to one beta, but she's swamped with her own last minute Christmas writing. Anyone else care to take a look at 6,000 plus words of UNCLE and point out where it desperately needs improvement?

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I may take you up on this tomorrow. My first two betas found some major structural things with the ending. I'm tweaking now, and wouldn't mind fresh eyes on the new version.