Thanks for the comments. And yeah, my partner has sinced weighed in and agreed that the last shot needs something more. So, it's off to the film to see if I can find something else. (The joy of working with only 2 hours of source: limited material to draw from. Sigh.)
And I have two questions for you. First, do you think the first verse works? It doesn't match the lyrics literally, but I was trying to get in some narrative context and something had to give. Second, does the musical bridge work for you? I was rather proud of that sequence, but my partner gave it a mixed review.
Okay, no more questions. And thanks again for letting me know what you think.
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Re: Loved It
Date: 2003-09-01 08:55 pm (UTC)And I have two questions for you. First, do you think the first verse works? It doesn't match the lyrics literally, but I was trying to get in some narrative context and something had to give. Second, does the musical bridge work for you? I was rather proud of that sequence, but my partner gave it a mixed review.
Okay, no more questions. And thanks again for letting me know what you think.