But I have a couple of questions. Do you think the first verse works, even though it doesn't literally match the lyrics? Does the musical bridge near the end work for you? And what about the last shot? (Okay, that was three questions, not two. *g*)
I'd be interested to hear what you think on any of those points.
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Date: 2003-09-01 08:57 pm (UTC)But I have a couple of questions. Do you think the first verse works, even though it doesn't literally match the lyrics? Does the musical bridge near the end work for you? And what about the last shot? (Okay, that was three questions, not two. *g*)
I'd be interested to hear what you think on any of those points.