Ahhh petal, I really liked it in its original form and I love it now.
I really love the linguistic touches like: He looks out the window in time to see four men—former soldiers from their bearing, and blackguards by their behaviour—strike Watson and bundle him into a windowless carriage and the growing understanding between Holmes and Mary is just really nicely done.
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Date: 2010-05-01 06:31 pm (UTC)Ahhh petal, I really liked it in its original form and I love it now.
I really love the linguistic touches like: He looks out the window in time to see four men—former soldiers from their bearing, and blackguards by their behaviour—strike Watson and bundle him into a windowless carriage and the growing understanding between Holmes and Mary is just really nicely done.
Thanks. ♥