Thank you, I really enjoyed reading this. You must've pulled the right vignettes because what remains is very coherent in content and structure and doesn't read at all like it's been worked on over several years, but comes across as a unit. I also enjoyed the glimpses into the lads' pasts you offered, I can very well imagine them as part of their background.
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Date: 2010-10-25 10:58 am (UTC)I also enjoyed the glimpses into the lads' pasts you offered, I can very well imagine them as part of their background.