A Drabble for PFL

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msmoat was the first to respond to my drabble meme, so she gets the first one:

Bodie/Doyle, prompt: spring.


A Young Man's Fancy

"In the spring a young man's fancy lightly turns to—"

"You're hardly young."

"You're as young as you feel."

"All I feel is tired."

"You know your problem, Doyle? No poetry in your soul."

"You've got enough for us both."

"You're in a mood."

"So good of you to notice. Now can we go home?"

"Who's home?"

"Yours. You've got that big tub. And if you're lucky…

"Yes?"

"I might just show you what this young man's fancy turns to."

"Wait a minute. You're older than me."

"You're as young as you feel, mate. Or so I've been told."

Comments

[hambelandjemima.livejournal.com]

Great banter, and I like how Doyle turns Bodie's words back on him :)

[przed.livejournal.com]

I'm a big fan of banter. And having the lads one up each other is always fun.

[snailbones.livejournal.com]

"You're in a mood." had me sniggering out loud. *g* Lovely, thank you - and so quick too!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

I love the lads like this. Thanks, M! Well done.

[msmoat.livejournal.com]

Hah! Good choice I made, wasn't it? *g* And it's lovely--it made me laugh, and it made me think of spring, and it brought the lads to life. Thank you!

[draycevixen.livejournal.com]

Lovely piece of banter, thank you. :D

[saintvic.livejournal.com]

Oh just wonderful, thank you!

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Ahh... brilliant. Could hear the lads perfectly.

[norfolkdumpling.livejournal.com]

Conclusive proof that you're as young as the agent you feel. *g* Delicious bantery goodness - lovely!

[przed.livejournal.com]

Sniggering is a good response. *g*

[przed.livejournal.com]

They're too much fun to write like this. (I'm giving them enough grief in my BB piece. They deserve some fun.)

[przed.livejournal.com]

Definitely a good choice. Spring and the lads: a winning combination. Thanks for the prompt!

[przed.livejournal.com]

My strategy is always this: when in doubt, write banter. ;-)

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks, petal. (It's far from brilliant, but hopefully it's fun. *g*)

[przed.livejournal.com]

Conclusive proof that you're as young as the agent you feel.

Heh.