I'm glad you think it works. I thought I'd possibly hit the right balance. It wasn't just his speaking voice I was worried about, but his internal monologue, filtered through that third person restricted POV.
As for his actions, I spent an entire day at work walking around, thinking about how I could get these two in close physical contact. If we have any telepaths lurking around, they'd have had a very interesting day. ;-)
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Re: Yay! *twirls you*
Date: 2011-02-24 11:55 pm (UTC)As for his actions, I spent an entire day at work walking around, thinking about how I could get these two in close physical contact. If we have any telepaths lurking around, they'd have had a very interesting day. ;-)