I am soooooo glad I didn't disappoint you. I wasn't sure what I was going to do with these two, and they weren't helping me out. But then I think I saw a comment from you about the frat boy-ness of Reboot!Kirk, and then this morning I had a vision of him lying in a rumbled bed saying that first line, and it all came together. I think I wrote the first draft in about half an hour (whilst avoiding an annoying job at work) and then poked away at refining it for the rest of the day.
I have to say, that paragraph you picked out and the one that follows it are the bits I'm most proud of in the whole thing. *g*
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Date: 2011-03-04 02:06 am (UTC)I have to say, that paragraph you picked out and the one that follows it are the bits I'm most proud of in the whole thing. *g*