Writing Whinge

[przed]

In spite of a visiting friend and a lovely migraine that's only now on the retreat after three days of making me miserable, I've actually managed to get some writing done.

The Good News
The final edits on my Wild Wild West story are in, and the zine it's in (the final issue of Gentlemen Never Tell, edited by the lovely Marian Kelly) should even now be on its way to the printers.

More Good News
I finished what I thought were the two final scenes in the Pros story I've been working on for-freaking-ever. (Not to be confused with the Pros novel I've been working on for even longer than that.)

The Not So Good News
Those two final scenes wrenched the story into a corner that there was no getting out of.

The Okay News
Whilst washing the lunch dishes up (let's hear it for working from home) I figured out a fix for the bloody story.

The Not-So-Okay News
The fix is going to require the wholesale gutting and replacement of those last two scenes. Fuckity-fuck-fuck-fuck

I shouldn't be surprised. This story was supposed to be a lark, something I could finish off in a week, tops, but it's got a screwy structure that's been a bear to work with, and in the *mumblemumble* years I've been writing it, it's morphed and mutated in a way that's necessitated multiple rewrites and amputations of various sections. I rather suspect that the discarded scenes now outnumber the ones that are actually in it.

Still, I think I've finally cracked it this time. And maybe I'll even get the bastard sorted out this week.

Doesn't make me feel like bashing my head against a wall any less, though. :-/

Comments

[przed.livejournal.com]

Well, there's less gnashing of teeth this morning, as I managed to finish most of the first of the new scenes last night. (It was a rewrite of one of the scenes that needed discarding with a total POV shift, so at least there were things I could cannabalize from the first go.)

BTW, once the darn thing is done, you wouldn't be interested in doing a beta, would you?

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

BTW, once the darn thing is done, you wouldn't be interested in doing a beta, would you?You're kidding right?? Wow. I'm immensely flattered that you'd ask.. the chance to get my hands on a PRZed fic before the hordes??? Bring it on baby..*g*

[przed.livejournal.com]

I'm absolutely not kidding. I'd love to get your comments. So, yay!

(If the writing proceeds at the current pace, you may actually see something at the end of the week.)