Fic: Watching/Watched (Pros, B/D)

[przed]

This is all shayheyred's fault.

Title: Watching/Watched
Author: P.R. Zed
Fandom: Pros
Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word Count: 200
Notes: For the stagesoflove comm. Two related drabbles for the Attraction theme.


Watching

From across the car park, Bodie watched as Doyle stretched his arms above him, his spine arching in pure physical pleasure, his head tilting back to catch the gold of the afternoon sun.

As always when watching Doyle, Bodie couldn't help but feel a slow, warming curl of arousal twine through his gut. Couldn't help but imagine what Doyle's lips would feel like beneath his own, what his throat would taste like on his tongue, what his voice would sound like gone hoarse with arousal.

When Doyle's eyes met his, he started like a guilty thing. And then he smiled.

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Watched

When he caught Bodie staring at him with an expression that might have been heat and might have been hunger, Doyle began to wonder. And wondered even more when Bodie flinched in surprise at finding himself watched, then smiled at him, the smile of a large cat hunting for its quarry.

He wondered if Bodie's heat would raze him to the ground. He wondered if Bodie's hunger would devour him. And he wondered if what he wanted more than anything was to be seared by Bodie's flame, to be consumed by Bodie's appetite.

Licking his lips, he made his decision.

Comments

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh nice. Very nice. The middle paragraph of Watched especially is wonderful - full of promise. And clearly thanks are due to shayheyred too!

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks.

Though I don't know whether to thank shayheyred or thwap her one. (Not that she held a gun to my head or anything. Apparently the merest mention of a story challenge is enough to get me going. Sigh.)

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Apparently the merest mention of a story challenge is enough to get me going.
Now, is that something you should be sharing with rabid Prosfic fans..? Cos if all I had to say was I wonder what if Doyle..?... Hee. Nah. Will be good. Promise. *g*

[przed.livejournal.com]

See, the problem is, that would totally work with me. That's why I wrote the sequel to my santa_pros story, 'cause someone made the comment that she wondered what Doyle's family thought about the two of 'em. Before I knew it, Doyle's sister was whispering in my ear.

Find a challenge that intrigues me (and there's the sticking point; it must intrigue me) and I'm totally there. And I wouldn't even mind. Much. *g*

omg, your icon is so perfectly Bodie

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

omg, your icon is so perfectly Bodie
Courtesy of Tiana - and posted for sharing here (http://community.livejournal.com/the_safehouse/113051.html#cutid1) which is at the_safehouse

[faramir-boromir.livejournal.com]

Clearly, you need to see Martin Shaw in person a LOT more often! These are delicious. I enjoyed both men being puzzled, but being puzzled by the same thing and making up their minds to find out. Great!

[przed.livejournal.com]

Clearly, you need to see Martin Shaw in person a LOT more often!

Don't I wish. ;)

I think I'm mostly done with the angsty first time stories (though I've got a piece of one sitting around waiting for me to decide what to do with it) but puzzled I can do.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Ooooh! And I wonder what will happen next! Yay! So glad I tempted you.

[przed.livejournal.com]

You are the queen of temptation. Darn you.

(I've already started the next one.)

[nakeisha.livejournal.com]

Very nice indeed. Very visual.

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks.

[sensine.livejournal.com]

These were good with my morning coffee! The boys are so true - and the moment so clear - I just wonder what happens next, uh??? *g*

[przed.livejournal.com]

The next part's almost done and should be up by the end of the day. Stay tuned...