Pic for 1000 and a Beta Plea

[przed]

I foolishly joined the picfor1000 challenge again this year, because I can't help myself and because it's a chance to write the lads. And I scored a really great prompt. I figured it would be a slam dunk to get a thousand words down.

So what does my brain do? It gives me plot. Lotsa plot. The sort of plot it's hard to do in only a thousand words. As a result, I've now got two related 1000 word stories hanging out on my hard drive.

Anyone out there in LJ land have time to take a look at 2000 words of Pros with some plot shoe-horned in?

Comments

[runriggers.livejournal.com]

bardicfaerie@yahoo.ca - send it over

[przed.livejournal.com]

Yay! They're on the way.

[runriggers.livejournal.com]

Anything specific you need or just a general look over?

[przed.livejournal.com]

A general look would be good. Confirmation that the voices are okay. A schmoop check wouldn't be a bad idea either. (I sometimes need to be saved from a tendency to sentimentality.)

And awkward repeated phrasing is my bete noire. As opposed to unawkward repeated phrasing, which I often use as a technical strategy. *g*

Catches on grammatical errors and typos always appreciated.

[runriggers.livejournal.com]

Okay - these shouldn't take to long to look over.

[przed.livejournal.com]

Groovy. Thanks so much.

[sooguy.livejournal.com]

I'd offer if you want a view point outside the fandom.

If not I understand.

I am probably just going to gush and not provide to constructive feedback anyhow. ;)

[przed.livejournal.com]

I'll take you up on this. I'm going to do initial edits based on runriggers's comments first, but I'll kick you something either today or tomorrow.