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Had a great practice today. The kids had fun and they were rocking the passing. The game itself was fun, but a bit less successful: final score: 4 - 8, and not for us, alas. The 4 points were all from the same kid. He's quiet and intense and really loves playing the game. Which is good, because he was in the final lineup for the evening and his three teammates completely lost interest in the game and were chasing each other around the wrong end of the field, leaving him to take on the opposing four players by himself. Which he totally did.

Ros is doing okay, but I swear she overthinks the dribbling more and more every week. My mission this week is to just get her kicking a ball around the park so she isn't carefully considering where she's going to put her foot every time she gets hold of the ball. (Her form is impeccable, but she's four times slower than all the other kids. Which I know, because I had them run the field with their balls as a warm up and she did one length in the time the other kids did four. ::sigh::)



In other news, my mom was visiting this weekend, which was lovely, and I took her to see the local production of War Horse on Sunday. The show was every bit as good as the NT version in London, minus a couple of dodgy accents. (Canadians should not be allowed to do Welsh accents. I'm just sayin'.) But man, that audience had hearts of stone. When I saw it in London, the entire auditorium was openly weeping at the end, but the Toronto audience...wasn't. There were a few discreetly dabbed eyes, and a very enthusiastic standing ovation, but you could tell the story didn't have the same resonance for this audience that it did for an English one. Interesting... (For the record, I was a total mess from the opening scenes of the show, benefit of knowing what was coming.)



Also, I've broken 14,000 words on the Pros Big Bang story, well over the rough draft limit. Yay! I was beginning to think that I might get a complete draft done in the next week or two, but then I sat down and mapped out the rest of the story and realized that there's 15 to 18 scenes to go. At 1,000 words a scene, that means I'm going to hit around 30,000 words again, and that's not getting done in the next week. But still, it's well on the way.

Date: 2012-06-27 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halotolerant.livejournal.com
Oh how lovely to see War Horse again! I really want to see that in London a second time. SO much better than the film.

Yay for 14k! Well done you *g* I realised, like last year, that my story needed kind of disassembling and reassembling with the same stuff in a different order, more or less, and that seems to be adding words which is good. I reckon mine might end up at 20k when all's said and done, but we'll see. Over the minimum, anyway. It's the summary that's bugging me!

Date: 2012-06-27 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] przed.livejournal.com
The play is really wonderful. Though it wouldn't be hurt by the addition of slashy Cumberbatch and Hiddleston. *g*

Yay for you being over the minimum! Though I have to say, having to gut a story and redo it is never a fun thing, even if it's sometime necessary. Glad it's ticking along, though. My strategy for dealing with the summary at the moment is avoidance. I hate writing summaries. When I have to do one for AO3 half the time I just pull the first line and call it sorted, which I don't think is going to work for the BB story. :-/

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