DRABBLE: The Watcher (SB/VM)

[przed]

Title: The Watcher
Author: przed
Rating: G
Pairing: SB/VM
Disclaimer: All lies, damned lies.
Notes: I'd thought my RPS muses had abandoned me. Apparently not. Based on this challenge meme.


‘Lij knew what everyone thought: that he was young, rambunctious. Flakey. But there was more to him than that. He knew when to be quiet, how to go unobserved. And he could see.

He saw the moment it happened.

Saw hands touch and linger. Saw green eyes and blue lock together with a connection older than the world. Saw Bean’s look of shocked pleasure and Viggo’s of smug delight.

Saw when affection passed into love and attraction grew into something else entirely.

When Dom asked what he was smiling about, he only laughed. He also knew how to be discreet.

Comments

[ribby.livejournal.com]

Oooh! Well done... I always love seeing their relationship through someone else's eyes.

*grin* And call me odd, but my favorite line: Saw Bean’s look of shocked pleasure and Viggo’s of smug delight. Smug Viggo, oh yep. He's so *good* when he's smug!

Great challenge meme... hmm. Have to see what it comes up with for me... my muses are being *ridiculously* quiet of late.

~Kris

[darknightjess.livejournal.com]

Ohhh, very nice. 'Spying Lij, too cute!

[undonne.livejournal.com]

Saw green eyes and blue lock together with a connection older than the world.

oh, yeah! :happy sigh:

[rinsbane.livejournal.com]

It's always when people go quiet that you have to be aware. Sneaky little Lij! Very cute.

[autumnsparkle.livejournal.com]

Ooh that's so friggin awesome.

I deeply admire people who can writea piece of exactly 100 words and make it a good one. And god, this was a good one, mildly said.

Saw when affection passed into love and attraction grew into something else entirely.


Lurved this line.

Brilliant!!

[liars-dance.livejournal.com]

Brilliant drabble! I can so see Viggo all smug and delighted *g*

Of course I had to do the meme - and it's given me something to think about too!

[seleneheart]

Great use of Elijah's point of view! And I second the admiration of the wonderful lines you use, especially green eyes locking onto blue.

[amentiii.livejournal.com]

Saw green eyes and blue lock together with a connection older than the world.

Gosh that's a great line. The whole thing's beautiful. This is a drabble to aspire to.

Thanks!

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Shocked!Sean and smug!Viggo are a wonderful combination. *g* Lovely drabble!

[bluespirit-star.livejournal.com]

Oh yum. This is so fabulously lush & all done in so few words!

Saw Bean’s look of shocked pleasure and Viggo’s of smug delight.

Gahhhh...just gorgeous!
I love it - thank you for posting!!!