DRABBLE: The Watcher (SB/VM)

[przed]

Title: The Watcher
Author: przed
Rating: G
Pairing: SB/VM
Disclaimer: All lies, damned lies.
Notes: I'd thought my RPS muses had abandoned me. Apparently not. Based on this challenge meme.


‘Lij knew what everyone thought: that he was young, rambunctious. Flakey. But there was more to him than that. He knew when to be quiet, how to go unobserved. And he could see.

He saw the moment it happened.

Saw hands touch and linger. Saw green eyes and blue lock together with a connection older than the world. Saw Bean’s look of shocked pleasure and Viggo’s of smug delight.

Saw when affection passed into love and attraction grew into something else entirely.

When Dom asked what he was smiling about, he only laughed. He also knew how to be discreet.

Comments

[ribby.livejournal.com]

Oooh! Well done... I always love seeing their relationship through someone else's eyes.

*grin* And call me odd, but my favorite line: Saw Bean’s look of shocked pleasure and Viggo’s of smug delight. Smug Viggo, oh yep. He's so *good* when he's smug!

Great challenge meme... hmm. Have to see what it comes up with for me... my muses are being *ridiculously* quiet of late.

~Kris

[przed.livejournal.com]

I always love seeing their relationship through someone else's eyes.

I do too, but I think this might be the first time I've ever gone to someone else's POV. Made it interesting.

I'm definitely happy I tried the meme. I needed a kick in the butt to write these two again.

[darknightjess.livejournal.com]

Ohhh, very nice. 'Spying Lij, too cute!

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[undonne.livejournal.com]

Saw green eyes and blue lock together with a connection older than the world.

oh, yeah! :happy sigh:

[przed.livejournal.com]

What can I say. I'm a sucker for a certain pair of green eyes. ;)

[rinsbane.livejournal.com]

It's always when people go quiet that you have to be aware. Sneaky little Lij! Very cute.

[przed.livejournal.com]

It's always when people go quiet that you have to be aware.

Isn't it just. ;)

[autumnsparkle.livejournal.com]

Ooh that's so friggin awesome.

I deeply admire people who can writea piece of exactly 100 words and make it a good one. And god, this was a good one, mildly said.

Saw when affection passed into love and attraction grew into something else entirely.


Lurved this line.

Brilliant!!

[przed.livejournal.com]

I quite enjoy the challenge of writing exactly 100 words. You take the basic shape of what you want to say and then sculpt it to fit the format.

[liars-dance.livejournal.com]

Brilliant drabble! I can so see Viggo all smug and delighted *g*

Of course I had to do the meme - and it's given me something to think about too!

[przed.livejournal.com]

I love a smug Viggo. ;)

And I look forward to your version of the meme.

[seleneheart]

Great use of Elijah's point of view! And I second the admiration of the wonderful lines you use, especially green eyes locking onto blue.

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much. This was a fun one to write.

[amentiii.livejournal.com]

Saw green eyes and blue lock together with a connection older than the world.

Gosh that's a great line. The whole thing's beautiful. This is a drabble to aspire to.

Thanks!

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the comments. Especially since I wasn't sure this one was particularly good.

[milochka.livejournal.com]

Shocked!Sean and smug!Viggo are a wonderful combination. *g* Lovely drabble!

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I think I need to do more with smug!Viggo.

[bluespirit-star.livejournal.com]

Oh yum. This is so fabulously lush & all done in so few words!

Saw Bean’s look of shocked pleasure and Viggo’s of smug delight.

Gahhhh...just gorgeous!
I love it - thank you for posting!!!

[przed.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.