DRABBLE: The Watcher (SB/VM)

[przed]

Title: The Watcher
Author: przed
Rating: G
Pairing: SB/VM
Disclaimer: All lies, damned lies.
Notes: I'd thought my RPS muses had abandoned me. Apparently not. Based on this challenge meme.


‘Lij knew what everyone thought: that he was young, rambunctious. Flakey. But there was more to him than that. He knew when to be quiet, how to go unobserved. And he could see.

He saw the moment it happened.

Saw hands touch and linger. Saw green eyes and blue lock together with a connection older than the world. Saw Bean’s look of shocked pleasure and Viggo’s of smug delight.

Saw when affection passed into love and attraction grew into something else entirely.

When Dom asked what he was smiling about, he only laughed. He also knew how to be discreet.

Comments

[autumnsparkle.livejournal.com]

Ooh that's so friggin awesome.

I deeply admire people who can writea piece of exactly 100 words and make it a good one. And god, this was a good one, mildly said.

Saw when affection passed into love and attraction grew into something else entirely.


Lurved this line.

Brilliant!!

[przed.livejournal.com]

I quite enjoy the challenge of writing exactly 100 words. You take the basic shape of what you want to say and then sculpt it to fit the format.